My first short film script draft

It’s raw and choppy and focuses more on action than strong characters but it’s a start. You can check it out here.

This script started with my idea of a divine force being sent to earth to eliminate all traces of evil in the world. In the script, this evil takes the form of abusive adults. (No I was not abused.)

The setting is based on the neighborhood I grew up in and some of the things my friends and I did. Yes, we actually made molotov cocktails, like the kind in Saving Private Ryan.

For the second draft, I’m going to make revisions while reading David Trottier’s The Screenwriter’s Bible. These changes will take the form of making the plot more believable and giving the characters more depth.

Note: I rushed the ending to finish on time. If I didn’t finish this within a month, I had to give $100 to an anti-gay marriage foundation through stickK.

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